Sunday, May 26, 2013

Poem Sampler

Satisfaction lies in the effort, not in the attainment, full effort is full victory. - Mahatma Gandhi.

I promise myself to make an effort, not an half-ass effort but a full throttle effort. Therefore to promote my poetry books, I will visit some poetry reading venues around town:
Prepared my promotional cards                                        check
Picked out some poetry reading venues                            check
Picked out some poems to read                                working on it

While I prep myself to go do some poetry readings (and promote my poetry books), please enjoy a sample of my poems:


"The Collection" is available at Amazon.com.


"Tortured Souls" is available at Lulu.com and Amazon.com.


"Adventures in the Courtyard" is available at Lulu.com and Amazon.com.

Sunday, May 19, 2013

Open Mic Poetry (Things I Learnt)

It may appear that I have an incoherent way of doing things, but when it works out, I feel satisfied.

I started hosting open mic poetry because I didn't like going out after work on the weekdays. The events usually start around 8 or 9 pm and run well into the night. Usually, I'm mentally drained after work and I need my sleep to get to work the next day. I couldn't find any on a Saturday in Fort Lauderdale area so I decided that I would host. I started hosting last year and I hosted this past Saturday, May 18. I learnt some things along the way:

Guaranteed attendance - by hosting, you know one (1) person who will definitely be there -YOU (most of the time). This past Saturday, I had more than one person and several people came after the event. I was asked if I asked people to RSVP when I sent out emails. I am thinking about my next invite if I should ask people to respond by email. However, another person told me a story of his friend, you had multitudes of people stating that they would attend and they didn't. I'm still thinking about it.

Concession - And I am not talking about popcorn and drinks. I am talking about asking people who told me they were interested in the event about day and time more suitable for them. Last year, my Saturdays shifted throughout the month (cf. this year, my event is on every third Saturday).

Buy In - "an agreement on a course of action." I liked the concession because I could plan better for every third Saturday. So I accidentally made other plans in April and had to cancel the event; I know better now! However, it seems that I forgot to do this "buy in" thing ...

Promotion - "Are you promoting?"..."Where are you promoting?" "Yes!" is my response. However, I make it pretty - I design my own postcards advertising the event. I keep it real -I drop some postcards in nearby libraries, place postings online at
http://poetry.openmikes.org
http://www.pw.org/content/open_mic_poetry
http://www.poets.org/calendar.php/

I tweet about it and post on facebook. Also I keep it cheap - Meetup isn't free!

Feedback - This is what I love about reading at open mic. As Wayne aptly said on Saturday that we writers tend to write in isolation so the reading allows you to mingle with other poets and get feedback. He had two excellent poems that he read, one he had entered into a contest about Miami. I also received some feedback that I will follow as I never realized how I pronounced certain words could be distracting: how I pronounced my "ing" words gives a distinct Caribbean flair (although my accent is faint) and my poem was on the beat era.
Take a listen then look at the words and give me your feedback.

Play Song



Sunday, May 12, 2013

Noooooooo...............


I can't get no satisfaction 
I can't get no satisfaction 
'Cause I try and I try and I try and I try 
I can't get no, I can't get no ...
                                            Rolling Stones

I can't blame the Rolling Stones. I can't blame the router company. I can't blame the universe. I feel that I am tech savvy but setting up a WiFi printer has beaten me. I'll just hardline that *(@#$. Now, the router acted up and has beaten me. It beat me so bad that I had to use my hotspot to get on the internet for my Twitter addiction. Then I was fed up and went out and bought another one (I'll return the other to the manufacturer as even when it did work, it was slow, slow ...) I figure it to be a lemon. Now, I am online so aah!  Now, I can review my three books...aaahhh! Then I can start writing so I can have something new when I host open mic next Saturday.

*****

...There's nothing like a big  culo cubano... (Blanco, 2012).

Heartfelt poems even the comedic ones. My favorite is "Betting on America" because I can totally relate to the family interactions while watching the pageant.

Looking for the Gulf MotelLooking for the Gulf Motel by Richard Blanco
My rating: 5 of 5 stars



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*****
He "offered priority signing to smokers, the reason being that, because they didn't have a long to live, their time was more valuable.  Four years later my (his) special treatment was reserved for men who stood five-foot-six and under...It seemed unfair to restrict myself (himself) to men, so I (he) included any woman with braces on her teeth." When the pregnant and the lame asked for special treatment, he made them wait their turn (Sedaris, 146).

The satire wasn't lost on me.  I enjoyed it but since my first Sedaris book was "squirrel seeks chipmunk" which reminded of Gerald Durrell's books which humanized animals except Sedaris' version was a bit more adult. For instant, in "The Squirrel and The Chipmunk" where the squirrel talks about jazz but the chipmunk agreed that she liked it too without knowing what jazz means, jazz because several things including anal intercourse, Communism, fortune-telling and "maggot-infested flesh of a dead body, the crust on an infected eye, another word or ritual suicide. And she had claimed to like it!"
Therefore, this book paled in humor when compared to the previous.

Let's Explore Diabetes with OwlsLet's Explore Diabetes with Owls by David Sedaris
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

It was ok - had some funny essays but I found "squirrel seeks chipmunk" stories funnier.

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*****
"Muses hate one thing with a passion: speech writing. To be more specific, we hate having to help some poor fool write a concession speech," (White in Chapter 21, Kindle Edition).

Let's be honest: nobody likes to lose. Then to explain and talk about losing. I hated losing the tech-savvy war where I couldn't configure those IPs to set up some wireless devices. I know it's going to cost me to bring in a specialist to help me configure these things. Where was I? This book - I really liked the concept (about a muse), how it was written (it was a very conversational style as I felt the muse was relating to me) and was real sorry that it ended. Overall, it was a enjoyable story!

The Life and Times of No One In ParticularThe Life and Times of No One In Particular by Jamie White
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

It had a great concept that was executed brilliantly: our narrator is a muse recounting a few of her victories and some of her pitfalls throughout time. It was narrated in an amusing, enchanting way.I couldn't wait to get to the next chapter and felt a bit sad (because there was no more to read). However,it did end at a good point.

I would recommend to anyone (especially those in need of a muse)!The Life and Times of No One In Particular

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*****
Well, I really want to have something new for next Saturday. I did issue a challenge: watch a movie at Cinema Paradiso in Fort Lauderdale then read it at the next open mic poetry event. 

I can't wait to find out how many took up the challenge.

*****
Blanco, Richard. 2012. "Betting on America," in Looking for the Gulf Motel, 9. Pittsburgh: University of Pittsburg Press.

Sedaris, David.2013. Let's Explore Diabetes with Owls. New York: Little, Brown and Company.

Sedaris, David 2010. squirrel seeks chipmunk. New York: Little, Brown and Company.

White, Jamie. 2012. The Life and Time of No One In Particular. Kindle edition.

Wednesday, May 8, 2013

Looking for The Gulf Motel - A Review

First of all, I had the opportunity on 4/27/13 to hear Richard Blanco read.  Listening to him read "Betting on America" was hilarious as it reminded me of my younger days with the whole family huddled in front of the one TV set (in the living room) tuned to the only channel showing the pageant and the discussions of why who should win.  The memories came back so vividly when he read "Betting on America." My senses came alive with the imagery that the words painted.


I finally finished reading The Gulf Motel and overall, it was a good read as I could feel a closeness to the author. I just wished he had read "Habla Cuba Speaking" because his tone would've helped me understand his words even better.  I keep looking at different angles and seeing varying images.

Throughout, you get a feel of "fracturing" and him piecing it together. He pieces together memories of his father:  In "The Port Pilot," we learn of his father's job in Cuba, him sitting with his father on a rock and his father dying. I like the way he used a photo he didn't have to create a more lasting photo of words in "Papa at the Kitchen Table."

 Most of his poetry is free form but he did use one form (that I recognized): villanelle. In the villanelle, "Love Poem According to Quantum Theory" he takes pieces from his poetry world and pieces from his scientific world (specifically physics). 

His poems do not just speak about his experience but I feel that we can all relate. One such experience is that of the disconnect between generations (regardless of the cause of the disconnect) which any reader can appreciate.

Blanco, Richard.2012. Looking for The Gulf Motel. Pittsburgh: University of Pittsburgh Press.


Sunday, May 5, 2013

The Road from Daytona to Sarasota



I wanted to promote my work so I planned it – to go on the road the first few days of May: first to Daytona to participate in open mikes and then to Sarasota for theFavorite Poem ReadingWhat I didn’t plan for was the gray skies opening up with the downpour of rain in Daytona.

Mediterranean CafĂ© was most welcoming as I signed up and participate in the open mike, it was mainly musicians but they welcomed poets. As the only poet, I had the floor and read six poems from Adventures in theCourtyard (even got asked for my card). The next day it rained so hard that I couldn’t make it to Port Orange for a Thursday open mike. Then, I headed across I-4 (did you know there’s a town called ORLAMPA?) to Sarasota.

Sarasota was hosting PoetryLife and I had bought a ticket for favorite poetry reading.  W.S. Merwin read his favorite poem from W.H. Auden. Naomi Shihab Nye read her favorite poem from W.S. Merwin.  My favorite reader (other than the excellent reading by the actors) was the teacher, Kate Cumiskey, who read One Art by Elizabeth Bishop. She shared how Bishop’s poetry has a special place for she and her sister; also, that her sister does poetry workshops in Newtown (poetry as healing especially after Sandy Hook Elementary tragedy). When I first learned of the tragedy, I was tending to my garden looking at my blooms and thinking of those poor children (which is why I wrote Flowers in My Garden). It was a learning experience listening how people were connected to the poem they chose and how they read it.

Being on the road did inspire some poetry and I captured some scenes through my lens.  Despite the downpour, I had visions of Springbreak past in Daytona with all the debauchery.

Walking along Beach Street with rain drizzling on my head;
Peering in the store windows, some had signs “for rent.”
Daytona wanted a more family-oriented image
So did they chase spring breakers away?

Walking along Altantic Street with gray skies overhead
Still more store windows with signs “for rent”
Made me wonder of days gone by
Even this past spring break:

Did it live up to the repuation 
Of wet t-shirt contests and indulgences
Alcohol galore until they’re pretty much face down
Or is that era in the past?

Like beat writers indulging, experimenting
Peppering their writings with the flow
As stream of consciousness go
(Yea, I’m also on the road)

Looking at ghosts of spring break pasts
As I pass the pizza and beer special
While I walk down the streets with gray skies
Blessing me with droplets of rain.

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